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COMPLETE ESSAY : Should attending class become an optional choice for University students ?

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COMPLETE ESSAY : Should attending class become an optional choice for University students ?

Bài gửi  lapnguyen6 on Wed Nov 23, 2011 12:17 pm



Many people recently have suggested that universities should make attending class an optional choice for student. As far as I am concern, I can not agree with them for several reasons.

The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant the basic fact that knowledge is infinite., And it is almost impossible for students to make a logical plan and right method of study which rightly orient them for future career or higher education. Many of them do not even know what or where they should start learning. As a result, they may go into a roundabout and waste lots of time. When attending real class, however, they will be regulated and given professional guides from well trained teachers to concentrate on their study.
Another reason why I disagree with the above idea is that I believe that through many class activities, especially group discussing, students learn a sense of teamwork, i.e., how to work with people different from them to achieve a common goal. We all have known that the modern society is a complicated system which requires team work, communication and cooperation. In fact, one of the most common questions in interviews is “are you a team player.” Indeed, the ability to work with other people in a team which student can obtain from attending class is indispensable for student in their future job application.
Moreover, students are taught responsibility and discipline with the rules of conduct in their University. For example, being in class at particular time every schoolday trains them with punctuality. In contrary, when attending class becomes optional, i.e., students will come one class when they like and discard any other whenever they become lazy. This will definitely form bad habits which are unfavourable for their life as well as future career.
Admittedly, there are a few advantages of making attending class an optional choice. For instance, students can control time more freely and are likely not to waste of time for several classes they may have learned beforehand. Also, it contributes to build a university student’s ability of learning by herself or himself. Still, I insist that the advantages of attending classes far out weigh in challenges.

In conclusion, university students should attend class not only because they can
be benefited from their professor’s guide, but also they can learn the sense of teamwork and responsibility and discipline which are important factors to get a good job after university.






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Bài gửi  le hue on Fri Nov 25, 2011 6:58 am

you have a coplete essay. congratulation you!
Your essay is have good structure, your point of view is quiet clear. You used a lot of transitions which I can recognize your view point easily. However, I realize your evidence in each paragraph is not enough to convince reader. your refuting is not clear. Really, your introduction and concluding paregraph is simple. If you can add some details, your essay will be much better. good luck!

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Re: COMPLETE ESSAY : Should attending class become an optional choice for University students ?

Bài gửi  caoxuanlien on Wed Dec 07, 2011 11:27 pm

^^
- can not => cannot
- it is ignorant => it ignores
- in contrary => on the contrary

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