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students at HUCFL should be allowed to grade thier teacher

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students at HUCFL should be allowed to grade thier teacher

Bài gửi  le hue on Fri Nov 18, 2011 8:31 am

I. INTRODUCTION
Thesis statement
Students at HUCFL should be allowed to grade their teachers
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The question whether students at HUCFL should be allowed to grade their teacher is the one of that is open for debate. Some people believe that students at HUCFL should have permission to evaluate teachers with their comments. However, other people believe disagree and stand that students can not totally give right comments for their teachers so grading teacher is not suitable. For me, I strongly believe HUCFL should allow students to grade their teachers because of some reasons
II. BODY
1. students can express their feeling about what they suitable and what is not from their teachers
+) students can show the good points and bad points of teachers
+) students can tell their aspiration with their teacher
+) students feel fair if they can say everything related their study’s quality
2. grading teachers will improve quality of teaching a lot base on comments of students
+) teachers can corrects their mistake and promote good points
+) teachers change their attitude or teaching method which suit to aspiration of students
3. some people say that many students can abuse the grading teachers to have wrong evaluation with teachers they don’t like
+) HUCFL council will choose comments which are suitable with practical situation to be final conmments
+) HUCFL council will have strict penalty with students who have wrong evaluation
III. CONCLUSION
Summarize all content of the whole essay
p/s : minh co viet doan introductory cho essay cua minh roi do. NEu ban nao co y kien hay correct gi thi correct nhiet tinh vao nghe. Minh rat happy khi nghe nhug nhan xet chi ra khuyet diem cua mih de lam essay cua minh tot hon. thanhks !! Laughing
ah quen! minh van chua ro lam cach dua cai refuting idea vao outline nhu the nao. help me, please!

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Re: students at HUCFL should be allowed to grade thier teacher

Bài gửi  nguyễn thj hòa on Mon Dec 12, 2011 7:37 pm

your outline is quite good.i just have some comments.i hope that you will consider them.may be it is good for you.good luck!
related--->relating
to be final comments--->to have final comments
give right comments for teacher--->give right comments to teacher
other people believe disagree???--->believe is a verb.if you want to use noun,it is BELIEF
i strongly believe--->you have to add THAT because after this is a clause

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